“Fall Into You” Review | Hayley’s Comments #2

This is review #2 of my own review series, Hayley’s Comments! I review books and literature from small authors, and give my honest and in-depth analysis of them. Here is “Fall Into You: A brother’s best friend romantic comedy”. The first in a series of similar reads, this one had its ups and downs, and I have plenty of thoughts on it.


Fall Into You
By Caroline Frank

Genre: Romance
Subgenre(s): Romantic Comedy, Slice-of-life

Liza Castelli, a graduate student from New York, is dumped by her unfaithful fiancé. She’s left reeling, only to come across her brother’s best friend and reformed party animal, Matt. The connection is instant, but she must hide her affection for Matt from her tight-knit, very protective Italian family.

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I must admit, it’s been a while since I’ve indulged myself in a bona fide romance novel such as this. As such, I was a bit apprehensive about delving back into the genre. I started reading this book back in April, shortly after my first Hayley’s Comments. It starts off a bit slow in the first two chapters, and that combined with other life circumstances meant that it took me about seven moths to pick this one up again after putting it down! After pushing through and reading this, though, I can’t say I have any regrets.

Fall Into You: A Brother’s Best Friend Romantic Comedy is the quintessential holiday romantic comedy; modern, cozy, and steamy at times too. A short yet engaging read, this book is perfect for fans of Hallmark movies and made-for-TV holiday classics. Know what you’re getting with this, though; it’s no The Notebook or The Fault In Our Stars. It’s not bad by any means, just don’t expect anything especially deep or groundbreaking. Think of it more like some light weekend entertainment, and you should get exactly what you want out of this book.

Scoring

Overall: 67/100

Plot: 6.5/10

Dialogue: 5/10

Pacing: 8/10

Characters: 6/10

Settings: 7/10

Length: 310 pages

Maturity: Mature Adult

Reading Difficulty: Low

Point Of View: 1st person, switching

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What I like

•It’s short and sweet!

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This book is just over 300 pages, including the epilogue and back matter. Yet, it almost never feels rushed or condensed down. It’s a great, bite-sized work of realistic fiction! It’s something that doesn’t require a large emotional investment like other, more complex reads. There’s even a recipe section included at the end! (I totally want to try the rosemary goat cheese potatoes)

•The plot has a nice, familiar feel to it.

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This might be the most desirable aspect of the book. It has a very honest, true-to-life tone to it. The dialogue feels like conversations you’ve had before. The jokes feel like jokes you’ve told before. Everything feels like stuff you could actually go through. It includes small little details that aren’t technically important to the plot, but are entertaining and add to the realism of it. E.g., the twin toddlers who like to parrot their parents’ cuss words, the super-protective Italian mother, the hard-working med school student. It honestly reads like an autobiography.

•It has a modern setting.

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Most of this book takes place in post-Covid New York City, and contains all the relevant themes. From wearing masks in the hospital to mentioning cancelled social events, it includes many relatable themes and scenarios from the Covid-19 era that are refreshing and new to see in a published work. It also portrays life in New York City fairly accurately, not glamourizing or romanticizing like many novels do. It does this without leaning too heavily in the “set in the big city’ aspect that a lot of other rom-coms lean on to carry the plot.

What I dislike

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•It’s very cliché at times.

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Some of the characters come off as very one-note and shallow at times. There’s the stereotypical Italian-American family from Long Island, the super cool and stylish best friend, and more. There were times when I audibly groaned at how corny it got. Even the main character, Liza; she’s dropped into this “not like other girls” stereotype that doesn’t let up until the last 3rd of the book.

Take this excerpt from Page 18:
“You could easily say that I wasn’t very popular growing up, due in large part to my huge, frizzy hair and nerdy tendencies. I preferred to stay in and watch Buffy The Vampire Slayer reruns than go out partying, thank you very much.”

Moments like this are dotted throughout the book, and it can get pretty old. Granted, most of these are in the first couple chapters, but they’re still present regardless. And it’s not like there’s a self-awareness to it; the characters are legitimately like this.

•Most of the characters have little depth to them, if any.

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Relating to the point above, most of the characters don’t seem to have a lot of complexity to them. Liza, Vinny, and Matt do show a good bit of intricacy to them, but most of the others just seem like stock characters meant to fill in voids in the plot. Most are only mentioned a couple times, have little dialogue, and/or aren’t given enough space to exhibit their own personalities, what makes them unique and human. The biggest example is Barbara, Liza’s best friend. Though she does get her own spinoff, there was plenty of potential for her to play a bigger, more interesting role in this book.

•It both starts and ends on a sour note.

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In a way, Fall Into You is like a cheeseburger with whole wheat buns; the meat is delicious, but the top and the bottom parts are almost enough to throw the whole thing off. As mentioned, the first few chapters throw you into a mess of clichés and mediocre dialogue. It appears Frank fell into the all-too-common writer’s trap of rushing through the beginning parts of a story in order to get to the bread and butter, the parts she really wanted to write. Then the latter few chapters focus on the plot twist of Liza discovering her surprise pregnancy with Matt, which I think was poorly executed. Six weeks after getting knocked up by your brother’s best friend who you’ve been dating behind his back, a baby belonging to two late-20’s med school graduates with recently-deceased fathers who haven’t been in loving relationships in years, living in the most expensive city in the United States…and everybody is just cool with that? Not one qualm, quandary, or moment of contemplation? And on top of that, they get married too? I understand that some artistic liberties need to be taken for he same of entertainment, but the suspension of disbelief can only go so far.

Content warnings

Sex/sexual themes, family trauma, strong language, alcohol use, grief, vomiting, pregnancy

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In Summary

Fall Into You is a light, compact, non-taxing romantic read, perfect for your weekend book club or evening reading break. Not without its flaws, this work is geared more toward the mid-30s hopeless romantic type. It’s not bad, by any means, so long as you’re not expecting a deep poetic novella or any philosophical social commentary. If you know what to expect, this book is a good read to spend a little time on.

“The Warriors of Bhrea: The Lost King” Review | Hayley’s Comments #1

This is review #1 of my own review series, Hayley’s Comments! I review books and literature from small authors, and give my honest and in-depth analysis of them. First up is the first book in the five-part Warriors of Bhrea series, called The Lost King. A self-published work written by a wonderful and kind author. I think this book will hold a special place in my heart now, being the first one in this series.


The Warriors of Bhrea: The Lost King
By T.M Kohl

Genre: Fantasy
Subgenres: High Fantasy, Isekai

Lauren Strauss, a 21-year-old nursing student, is magically teleported from her peaceful city life to an entire different world that she knows nothing about. She must navigate the kingdom of Bhrea while also trying to find out why she was put there, all the while dealing with the possibility of having latent magical powers of her own.

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I’m glad I stumbled across this book; it was pretty easy for me to miss, honestly. Once I decided to start reviewing, I spent a while perusing my Twitter feed, searching for some books that I could take a look at. T.M. Kohl just happened to be one of the people that I followed, so after clicking on several people’s profiles, I come across hers and see that she so happens to have a book series she’s working on. Interested, I start reading the first of them; and now, a month and a half later, I’m writing a review of it. To think that I could easily have overlooked this work of literature makes me think fate was on my side.

The Lost King is a fine fantasy adventure, flawlessly absorbing me into its lore and keeping me with it all the way to the last page. It has a way of keeping your attention beat by beat, all while not skimping on the details and imagery that attracts you to it in the first place. Unlike a more traditional, slow-burn fantasy novel like The Hobbit, this book skips over a lot of the filler and minutiae, jumping right into the plot important details and real character development. In my opinion, that’s a great thing.

I especially like how it doesn’t inundate you with unimportant characters, verbose setting descriptions, or irrelevant dialogue. It’s beautiful in it’s simplicity, and manages to be condensed but still enticing. The Lost King appears to be a great start to a series, and is perfect book to get lost in during a long car ride or a weekend out of town.

Scoring

Overall: 81/100

Plot: 7/10

Dialogue: 10/10

Pacing: 6.5/10

Characters: 6/10

Settings: 5/10

Length: 334 pages

Maturity: Teen/Young Adult

Reading Difficulty: Moderate

Point Of View: 3rd person limited

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What I like

•There are very few tropes or clichés used at all. Lauren, the main character, is just a normal girl who magically gets transported to an unknown land, and that’s exactly what it feels like.

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Nothing about her feels cheap or unrealistic, and the same goes to most of the rest of the characters. The classic “character does something stupid or illogical just to advance the plot” cliché is nowhere to be found. There’s no predictable or forced romance; the reader may be led to believe that Lauren and Val (the crown prince to the throne of the kingdom of Bhrea) will fall in love by the end of the book, falling into each other’s arms in a romantic resolution. That doesn’t end up happening, though. Tropes are unavoidable, of course, but those that are included seem to be implemented well.

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•The story has its own special fantasy language, called Korvet. I think this is one of the defining features of the lore. It feels very fresh and original, not too complex and with handy translations. The way it’s integrated into the plot is especially great.

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Normally, fantasy languages are often mentioned in passing, with characters using a few words here and there, the language itself hardly mentioned at all. Either that, or every character in the book is instantly and seamlessly fluent in the language, with the dialogue, place names, lores and legends all just a confusing mashup of English and Fantasyish. The Lost King does a great job of implementing Korvet, though. English and other earthly languages are completely unknown to Bhrea, and Lauren spends the better part of the book learning the language, practicing it, and learning how to use it in conversation. And it’s not like there’s a time skip and then she’s fluent like a native speaker; throughout the book, you’ll see her ask how to say specific words, mix in English words, or generally make mistakes when speaking; all in a way that feels completely natural, pretty much exactly what it feels like with real life language barriers. The Korvet dialogue is translated into English for us, but Kohl somehow found a way to do that and still incorporate all of the elements I mentioned.

•The dialogue is exceptional. It feels smooth and natural, just like people would talk and communicate in the real world.

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It’s not exceedingly verbose, and isn’t trying too hard to sound magical or fantastical. You won’t see any of the villains going on annoying, long-winded monologues that last three pages either. This adds a level of realism to the story, and makes it and the characters within it much more relatable and interesting. Kohl writes dialogue like a veteran author–even better than some of them.

What I dislike

•I would’ve liked to read more about Lauren’s life on Earth.

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Only the first chapter, and a little bit of the prologue and second chapter take place on Earth. Though there are some references and reminders of her life on Earth, with Lauren’s purse full of a few precious belongings being teleported to Bhrea along with her, a lot about her day-to-day life back at home is shrouded in mystery. It feels like Kohl wasn’t really interested in the realistic, down-to-earth elements of her writing, like she just glossed over all of that in order to get straight to the cool interesting fantasy bits.

•As mentioned above, the book is more simple and condensed than your average fantasy novel. But that comes at a cost: a lot of things are mentioned briefly and are not expanded on enough.

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For example, there’s a whole pantheon of gods in the world of Bhrea. Joss, Dolan, Svorra; these are all very important figures that are mentioned throughout the lore, yet we as readers know relatively little about them. Perhaps the most notable thing that’s overlooked is the Sebaal, a group of warrior cultists that are determined to kill Lauren and steal her mysterious necklace, the Sem-Kelad. Though they’re the main focus of the plot, with Lauren being trained to fight them throughout the book, we know surprisingly little about them before the last few chapters of the book. Overall, I would’ve liked to see a more engaging side plot, focusing less on just Val and Lauren’s personal struggles.

•There are very few settings throughout the book. Granted, those that are mentioned are described well enough, but the way the settings are involved in the plot make the fantasy world feel very small.

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About 75% of the book takes place in the city of Terrn, and about 80% of that takes place in one giant mountainside palace. I wish I’d seen Val and Lauren explore the kingdom a little more. Maybe they could have explored some of the nearby cities, visited the Algarans in the north, had a run-in with the mysterious Kataal people. It’s an interesting narrative choice to have the majority of the setting condensed into such a small area, and one that I’m not too fond of.

Content warnings

Death, blood, battle and violence, alcohol use

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In Summary

The Lost King is a fine work of fantasy writing. Short and condensed but filled with enticing characters and lore, this is a good read for the avid reader looking for a fresh new world to get lost in for a little bit. Though some of the more important fantasy details are a bit lacking at times, overall this makes for a fine novel that will leave you excited for the sequels.

Announcing My New Book Review Series!

Hello there! A short update from your friendly neighborhood wordsmith. After being missing in action for several months, I’m happy to announce Hayley’s Comments, a new series that I’m launching here on this website.

I’ve been meaning to do something like this for a while, but I wasn’t exactly sure how to. I knew that I wanted to support small authors like myself, and steer my blog to be more writing- and literature-focused. This new series helps with both of these issues, with other added benefits as well.

This series will be focused on rating and reviewing books from smaller and lesser-known authors. I’ll read these books cover to cover, then give an honest, in-depth, and spoiler free analysis, using a special rating system of my own creation. I’ll add a new section to the top bar with more information, and when I do, I’ll link it here.

I’m working on the first review, and though I don’t have a specific date will post it soon after it’s done. Look on my Twitter page for faster updates, and to leave me with any quick questions or comments you may have. Thank you for your support, and I’m excited to see what you all think of what I have in store!